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BURNING THROUGH TIME... by =ScummyVladDrac:iconScummyVladDrac:





Walking in a dream, fed by the imagine of a soul stuck in reality
Timeless, intelligent, overpowering, limitless, exceptional… afraid
A young man, unsure of his journey through the wilderness of time
Surrounded by images, unknowing this mind is travelling through time
Controlled by forces, those who seek dominate and a giant bunny
Visiting a place, the universe drives, transcending to the 4th dimension
What shall become of out hero, is he our future, our own evolution
He is another lost soul, loved by family, controlled by bunny called Frank

Things must be done, events to set right, depraved dwellings to burn
For he must see the sparrow for she is the key to his waking dreams
Life and love is not some graph, it is the centre, everything and nothing
Emotion overflowing, brainwashed robots, more lost than my own mind
Surviving in a world dominated by popularity, no room for freedom
So many scared faces, taking the weakness of our youth with them
Disgusting secrets show, mind manipulation grows, it becomes clear
Something is wrong, the weak suffer the strong, were will it end?

Confusion about what to do, primal urges control the desire inside
Wanting to express, but is focussed on mind generation image tests
A perfect moment, when lips finally touch, indescribable euphoria
The ecstasy of a kiss that would even strike jealousy in Smurfette
What’s happening, everything’s upside down, dancing girls jump around
Be proud of yourself, for it is time to remove your stupid man suit
The rabbits are proud, now Frank must suffer, your fate must be shared
A moment of realisation arrives for the confused, blessed & fearful

Afraid to be alone, liquid spears causing faithless misunderstandings
His portal to the past is calling him, the rabbits sing, their job is done
Our heroes vessel has finally arrived, his final path is now prepared
Now rest & reflect as your journey ends, give fate time to catch up
His journey is almost over, now the tangent universe has split & folded
Fates messenger is here, for the price of time waltzing has a fatal cost
Everything is calm finally, as the engine of death arrives just for you
All the horror, all his fears departs as our hero, Donnie begins to ascend.

Everything is finally the way it should be in this mad world… Cellar Door.


© 2005 FRAGGLE/GREeN PELLiC inc
©2005-2009 =ScummyVladDrac
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Submitted: August 19, 2005
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Well for everyone who’s seen Donnie Darko (one of the greatest films ever made) this is my homage to this great movie, I have been working on this piece for the better part of 3 months on & off & it was originally 54 lines long, but is now a lonely 32 lines. I have already submitted this piece once before but i was so disgusted my the crap quality of it I removed it & re-designed it to what it is now. This part I have written focuses on the final moments as Donnie looks back at his journey while waiting for his time travel experience to begin. I hope you all like this, it is certainly a piece I had doubts on achieving the quality to the level to the film but I always do enjoy a good challange from time to time. Cheers Fraggle.
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That's great. I really liked reading this because I just bought this movie a few days ago and I love it. It's wonderful.

I love your references. ^^ The Smurfette and "stupid man suit" made me giggle. =P Great job.
It's a great movie isn't it, I'm glad you like the piece, thanks heaps!

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