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Lonely Alone… by Fraggle

I’m So Lonely Inside
No One To Talk Too, No One But You
Ashamed & Afraid
Damaged By My Own Devises
If I Destroy The Old Me
Would What’s Left Cope?
Letting A History Run Free
Means A Long Life, Just With Me

Just Another Glance
A Second Chance
What I Wouldn’t Do
To Be With You.

I Can’t Sleep, I’m So Tired
So Many Questions
Just One Answer I Seek
I Need One Moments Peace
Life Now Suspended In Time
Waiting For The Sublime
Begging For A Redemption
I Know I Don’t Deserve

Just Another Glance
A Second Chance
What I Wouldn’t Do
To Be Close To You

The Power Of Realisation
Swelling Behind My Eyes
Sorrow Now Overwhelms Me
Depression Hidden By Lies
My Body Aches From Longing
To Hold You Close Again
Lips Quiver & Hands Tremble
Nothing Will Ever Be The Same

Just Another Glance
A Second Chance
What I Wouldn’t Do
For A Lifetime With You

© 2007 FRAGGLE/ ScummyVladDrac
©2007-2009 =ScummyVladDrac
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Author's Comments

Someone I know from deviantART (you know who you are) made the comment I never submit writing anymore & further more have lost what it takes to write a song/poetry. This is my official answer to that comment, it is a piece I wrote during this week, it is basically about the sorrow we all feel when a loved one leaves or a relationship ends. The depression & misery that comes with ti is a good subject. For me anyway!

Hope you all enjoy & just I will submit more writing from now onwards. :heart: Fraggle!

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:iconfree-bird:
interesting use of capitalisation, any particular reason for that?

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:iconscummyvladdrac:
I think when something so powerful as loss & loneliness is spoken about ever word should be made an example of. I never thought anyone would have got that, you are smarter than the average bear.

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:iconduckie2318:
wow this is really good..I am glad you submitted this. I think you did a wondeful on capturing that exact emotion. :clap: Yay Fraggle!
:iconscummyvladdrac:
thankyou my duckie, cheque's in the mail or male... whichever one is fine!

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:iconnutmeg-42:
This is so beautiful. I think we've all been there at some stage. You have captured it wonderfully. :-)

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:iconscummyvladdrac:
awe, thankyou so much, it's been so long since I have written anything, I was wondering if this was going to work, but I got the nutmeg seal of approval so I am happy now!!! :hug:

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:iconmessenger-of-evil:
this is really beautiful, you haven'y lost anything. and yes, I was wrong!

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:iconfree-bird:
i thought that might have been it, very nice touch there.

good to see my linguistic studies haven't been completely useless.

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take a whiff on me take a whiff on me
everybody take a whiff on me
i said a hey
hey
baby take a whiff on me
:iconscummyvladdrac:
money well spent!

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